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Old Posted 06-25-09
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NICE!! Showing tonite

NO chic would fuck you, no matter how many hennesey sips
Micheal Jacksons dead now so you'll never lose your virginity bitch
I'll body you over the net..witness one of the worst endings
rescue choppers a look for u, n google can power the search engines
nother vet smashing a noob..think not? ur ass is confused
seeing it any other ways questionable vision thats asking to lose
faggot I'ma embaress ya..really think your a challenger??
for me its pretty easy to see te aura either hot pink or laveder
this kids garbage..Im already bored..I'ma rich artist
yea I got over'head..bout twenty minutes after ur bitch started
big deal your in new zealand posting them trash raps
get laughed at.. I zzz @ it same old way I do other whak crap
ur crap, ur weak, this lines bad but ur writing is worst
I'll say it simple an plain..but a get DQ'd for biting ur verse
in this tourney Im god eating..you aint hard weakling
Get on my lvel..I'll play super mario an give u the star treatment
see this is fun to me..more than awesome actually
now feel free to have the time of ur life..shortened drastically
your dope!!!!!!!naw thats far from true..20 lines aint hard to do
except for the voters...for real who wana read 10 bars from you?!?!

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Old Posted 06-26-09
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Good battle.


Te Ora



If your name is a gay handle, we'll take your statements at face value
The best of both worlds means his sexuality, not space travel
My dick is power, tell a chick to sprint to the crib at a midnight hour
The only response to your late night calls is "Try again during business hours"
Nobody wills this sucker to drop. I'll come to the spot, bussin' a glock
But if you want Hush, I just hold a pillow to his head.. that'll muffle the shot.


I felt like these were your best lines. You also had some others that I liked.


Your concepts are just relayed, we've all seen better plays
A Hush verse is a flashback. Reading mine, you're back to present day

Mother said knock you out, working it back and forth cause she's thorough
To me, you're a Space Cowboy. That bitch, a reverse cowgirl

Your ideas won't translate to disses, choose improvement, use some sense
Vous êtes un putain de gay et vous ne pouvez pas le rap, excuse my French


These three sets are all good. They are clever but I just feel that they aren't very hard hitting. I like the third one but it is not really fitting to a battle at least I don't think so.





Space Cowboy


NO chic would fuck you, no matter how many hennesey sips
Micheal Jacksons dead now so you'll never lose your virginity bitch
ur crap, ur weak, this lines bad but ur writing is worst
I'll say it simple an plain..but a get DQ'd for biting ur verse
see this is fun to me..more than awesome actually
now feel free to have the time of ur life..shortened drastically
your dope!!!!!!!naw thats far from true..20 lines aint hard to do
except for the voters...for real who wana read 10 bars from you?!?!




nother vet smashing a noob..think not? ur ass is confused
seeing it any other ways questionable vision thats asking to lose
this kids garbage..Im already bored..I'ma rich artist
yea I got over'head..bout twenty minutes after ur bitch started


When I first read these lines I thought they were pretty good. But then I looked again and realized that I didn't understand the first set. I think it would have been really good if the second line was worded differently. Then the second set didn't seem to make much sense either because I don't know what you meant by "I got over'head"




Space Cowboy had four punchlines that I really liked and Te Ora only had three, I find Te Ora's verse to be equal to Space Cowboy's after that. If those two punches I mentioned above had read differently for me I would have Space Cowboy taking this easily. But it is about equal in terms of how much of each verse I like but with Space Cowboy's being a little more hard hitting.



Vote- Space Cowboy



"En mi vida, el oscuro me mantiene"

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Old Posted 06-27-09
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1-0 Hush
uppin

ya ho's suck
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Old Posted 06-30-09
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uppin for more votes
i will drop a vote after work
i'll keep this open til friday

ya ho's suck

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Old Posted 06-30-09
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space cowboy killed it


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Old Posted 07-03-09
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Fuck this shit
I was gonna win neway
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Old Posted 07-03-09
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Hot damn..

Hush murdered ..

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I'm so rare, battlin Chino's like Africa
Yeah niggaz talk about it but they don't really wanna go there
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Old Posted 07-07-09
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Hush moves on to the Finals

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