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X, whose real name is Earl Simmons, has been in and out of jail for the last few years, and has faced a lot of legal... read more
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Junior Member
Join Date: May 2009
Location: NYC
Posts: 27
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NICE!! Showing tonite
NO chic would fuck you, no matter how many hennesey sips Micheal Jacksons dead now so you'll never lose your virginity bitch I'll body you over the net..witness one of the worst endings rescue choppers a look for u, n google can power the search engines nother vet smashing a noob..think not? ur ass is confused seeing it any other ways questionable vision thats asking to lose faggot I'ma embaress ya..really think your a challenger?? for me its pretty easy to see te aura either hot pink or laveder this kids garbage..Im already bored..I'ma rich artist yea I got over'head..bout twenty minutes after ur bitch started big deal your in new zealand posting them trash raps get laughed at.. I zzz @ it same old way I do other whak crap ur crap, ur weak, this lines bad but ur writing is worst I'll say it simple an plain..but a get DQ'd for biting ur verse in this tourney Im god eating..you aint hard weakling Get on my lvel..I'll play super mario an give u the star treatment see this is fun to me..more than awesome actually now feel free to have the time of ur life..shortened drastically your dope!!!!!!!naw thats far from true..20 lines aint hard to do except for the voters...for real who wana read 10 bars from you?!?! Last edited by Space Cowboy; 06-26-09 at 03:10 AM.. Reason: Automerged Doublepost |
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Eastern European
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: On My Way to Purgatory
Posts: 225
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Good battle.
Te Ora If your name is a gay handle, we'll take your statements at face value The best of both worlds means his sexuality, not space travel My dick is power, tell a chick to sprint to the crib at a midnight hour The only response to your late night calls is "Try again during business hours" Nobody wills this sucker to drop. I'll come to the spot, bussin' a glock But if you want Hush, I just hold a pillow to his head.. that'll muffle the shot. I felt like these were your best lines. You also had some others that I liked. Your concepts are just relayed, we've all seen better plays A Hush verse is a flashback. Reading mine, you're back to present day Mother said knock you out, working it back and forth cause she's thorough To me, you're a Space Cowboy. That bitch, a reverse cowgirl Your ideas won't translate to disses, choose improvement, use some sense Vous êtes un putain de gay et vous ne pouvez pas le rap, excuse my French These three sets are all good. They are clever but I just feel that they aren't very hard hitting. I like the third one but it is not really fitting to a battle at least I don't think so. Space Cowboy NO chic would fuck you, no matter how many hennesey sips Micheal Jacksons dead now so you'll never lose your virginity bitch ur crap, ur weak, this lines bad but ur writing is worst I'll say it simple an plain..but a get DQ'd for biting ur verse see this is fun to me..more than awesome actually now feel free to have the time of ur life..shortened drastically your dope!!!!!!!naw thats far from true..20 lines aint hard to do except for the voters...for real who wana read 10 bars from you?!?! nother vet smashing a noob..think not? ur ass is confused seeing it any other ways questionable vision thats asking to lose this kids garbage..Im already bored..I'ma rich artist yea I got over'head..bout twenty minutes after ur bitch started When I first read these lines I thought they were pretty good. But then I looked again and realized that I didn't understand the first set. I think it would have been really good if the second line was worded differently. Then the second set didn't seem to make much sense either because I don't know what you meant by "I got over'head" Space Cowboy had four punchlines that I really liked and Te Ora only had three, I find Te Ora's verse to be equal to Space Cowboy's after that. If those two punches I mentioned above had read differently for me I would have Space Cowboy taking this easily. But it is about equal in terms of how much of each verse I like but with Space Cowboy's being a little more hard hitting. Vote- Space Cowboy "En mi vida, el oscuro me mantiene" Last edited by Menz; 06-26-09 at 10:01 PM.. |
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sioux-nami
Join Date: May 2005
Location: USA
Posts: 2,102
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1-0 Hush
uppin ya ho's suck
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sioux-nami
Join Date: May 2005
Location: USA
Posts: 2,102
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uppin for more votes
i will drop a vote after work i'll keep this open til friday ya ho's suck
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R.I.P. THE KING!
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: Pentagon
Posts: 5,148
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space cowboy killed it
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Junior Member
Join Date: May 2009
Location: NYC
Posts: 27
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Fuck this shit
I was gonna win neway |
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SMH REAL TALK!
Join Date: May 2005
Location: north-east
Posts: 3,782
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Hot damn..
Hush murdered .. Chino-XL I'm so rare, battlin Chino's like Africa Yeah niggaz talk about it but they don't really wanna go there |
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sioux-nami
Join Date: May 2005
Location: USA
Posts: 2,102
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Hush moves on to the Finals
ya ho's suck
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