Just got back from the mountains, thought I’d check the spot
Was gon’ gamble on some feed but I guess all bets are off
What the fuck, kids dissing each other, tryna’ get a name
By shitting on the next dude when they sounding quite the same
“You whack” “No you whacker” well, how about this
Y’all scribbling doo-doo’s and me, I’m the shit
Serious, I son this Child on some grown man biz
I’d spend 10 minutes with you, but I ain’t tryna’ Play with kids
And this ain’t just another dot com, this the home of the real
I’ll burn a Jay for the fuck of it ‘cause weeds my appeal
Aye Con, thanks, you said I could blame it on you
Who’da thought a rejuvenated notepad would come out of lame diss or two
Now I’m back in this bitch, not used to rappin’ like this
But I still cause sparks ‘cause I’m on that MaJiKal shit
Shout out to Scotty B, this cheers is for you
Real drunk talk, that’s how Liquor Lyricists do


quick key-style. nothing serious, just thought it's funny how many disses there are. if you gon' leave feedback here, please leave feedback on my other piece

link here: http://www.anotha.com/f30/something-...-about-t68460/

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^ Haha cool opener since feed of late has been a little dire, very relevant. Nice wordplay with the "gamble/bets are off". Nice flow too fam.

^ Nice generic insult; could be taken offensively by anyone who is uncertain about the strength of their recent writtens. Nice flow; vocab could've been a little stronger but for a key, mehh lol.

^ Not overly feeling these lines, a little bit filler-ish, but nice summary of recent bickering.

^ Very nice personal, & very prominent effective punch. The wordplay is sublime.

^ Not a very powerful diss, but shots fired letting Jaymz not he's on your radar.

^ Not exactly insulting; rather congratulating him for reviving the Notepad, though slating his work as "lame" is a nice subtle jab at his ability. The twist on the "Aye Con/Akon" is very nice when paired with "blame it on you".

^ A little self glorification but nice play on Magic/MaJiK with causing sparks.

^ "Cheers/drunk talk/LL" haha, nice linkage there. Props on the nod too



All in all, a solid Key; nice flow & not overly done. Could've benefitted with a little rewording but you know how we do fam lol; still strong.

Nice to have you back repping the LL. Keep up appearances.

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not bad at all..

Serious, I son this Child on some grown man biz
I’d spend 10 minutes with you, but I ain’t tryna’ Play with kids
^^this was intriguing....

this had a couple of decent punches.. flow was off n on.. couple of filler lines but overall a decent drop..

Now that was sweet. I can't ever really remember you dropping raps. This was really nice man. LL4Lyfe lol.

The "Aye Con" line, fuck that was brilliant.