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Rapper 50 Cent continues to shake up the "Twitterverse" with a series of tweets today that drew the scorn of celebrity... read more
Added: Tuesday, September 7 2010
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Rapper 50 Cent continues to shake up the "Twitterverse" with a series of tweets today that drew the scorn of celebrity... read more
Added: Tuesday, September 7 2010
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Dreamy stares, cuddles and kisses evapourate,
Black skies emerge, kiss of death resusscitates, Cupid's dark frustration tainting true desire, His loneliness expanding to brimstone hellfire, The purest jealousy, green envy affecting, No longer protecting, seeker of love neglecting, Love is faltering, less marriages and more divorces, More settlements in courts over kids and porches... Mysterious how good memories mask the brain, One good day in a week distracting the pain, Lyrics dancing over horizons,starlight silhouettes, Shakespeares northern lights, vocabulary pirouettes, Melancholic shades of blues and crimson hues, Lilac crystal tears shed for my memories of you, Aura of sadness, tides of nostalgia inside me, Hurt pride, but believe true hearts reunited... Fields of dreams, miles of smiles in fables, Dealt life's draw, Ace of Spades on the table, Play the hand or fold, you lose either choice, Attention and heart stolen like Ariels voice, The Jenga tower is staged, bonds will crumble, Love is a house of cards designed to tumble, Love is no longer enough, trust is now essential, Paranoia reduces foundations to dust like potential... Feed Plz...    |
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Location: NEW YORK
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WOW man that the best thing do describe this man im fucking impressed man really m this shit is awsome ya should leave somee more feed if you want to get it
some of my fav parts Fields of dreams, miles of smiles in fables, Dreamy stares, cuddles and kisses evapourate, Black skies emerge, kiss of death resusscitates Love is faltering, less marriages and more divorces, More settlements in courts over kids and porches... man ya had some nice vocab and good choice of words when puttin this piece together great job sad ur wife is this bimpo, ducking ya stick like limbo the stray dog of the block that roaming around nimpho |
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Thinking About Something
Join Date: May 2005
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you showed a high level of inteligence in the choice of words here. and i love all the metaphors you have. The Jenga tower is staged, bonds will crumble Love is a house of cards designed to tumble especially those two. everythin' was described really well. my favorite stanza was the last. all the card metaphors got to me. haha Mysterious how good memories mask the brain, One good day in a week distracting the pain to me, i see it workin' the other way around. but it's all a matter of views. like you're sayin' that you're lookin' at all the good things and they hide away the bad. for me, it feels like the bad things cover up the good things. but it's still understood. really great piece here. keepin' up SO "My belief is that art should not be comforting; for comfort, we have mass entertainment, and one another. Art should provoke, disturb, arouse our emotions, expand our sympathies in directions we may not anticipate and may not even wish. Art should certainly aspire to beauty, but there are myriad sorts of beauty: the presentation of a subject in the most economical way, for instance; a precise choice of language, of detail." ---Joyce Carol Oates Twitter: @xMaJiKx Liqour Lyricists |
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