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Old Posted 05-08-06
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Cant sleep knowin death is creepin, sneakin...
up on me in the midst of the evenin'...
fear of leavin' blessin' to be conceived and..
a curse to have a limit on breathin'..
this how i believe it, livin life with an unknown reason
people lie, say they know, makin money offa sleasin' and treason
quit teasin, bitch you gonna end up bleedin
the simple fact is that its playa hata huntin season
which way do you wanna take it, ya music is basic,
so i got no choice but to delete n erase it
face it...ya whole concept i played out
i couldnt feel one rhyme or line you layed out
diss my shit pop u in the face with haste, what u wanna say now
most people cave in and crumble imma cave out (spread my shit)
cant believe the world its so depressin'
only people i trust are my 2 homeboyz smith and wesson
thought gettin shot would teach me a lesson
but i only took out from that experience thats lifes a blessin

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Your raps run thru weak-minds......while revolution got concrete-rhymes.....to get the freak-dimes...yours leave you broke on the street-mines....carry on to make money with unique-chimes...streets leak-whines...raps like coke i spread these lyrics out in Neat-Linez.......Revolution.
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Old Posted 05-08-06
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it's pretty tight.. nice flow nd lyrics
keep it up

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Old Posted 05-08-06
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aight thanks for the feed..still uppin tho if possible

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Your raps run thru weak-minds......while revolution got concrete-rhymes.....to get the freak-dimes...yours leave you broke on the street-mines....carry on to make money with unique-chimes...streets leak-whines...raps like coke i spread these lyrics out in Neat-Linez.......Revolution.
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