Some one tell the doctor there's a hole in my brain.
i'm pathetic, i need a medic coz i'm going insane.
see this blade to my vein won't sustain the pain much longer.
it's hard tryna maintain with all this strain i'm under.
it aint a wonder that i'm losing the plot.
heads stewed in the pot, any minute bloons gonna pop.
so many illousional thoughts, dunno whats true or is false.
my past is truly at fault, not growing to an adult. kid in mind!
you've past your child hood see i'm still living mine.
still waiting with my token at the back of the dinner line.
You'd think i loved my past the way they call me Mr Daze.
But it was just a name given ,the way i'd always drift away.
life was hard, take a look at the scars that my sister made.
split my cranium, maybe babies can't play the twister game.
or rollerblades, understand it's hard to hold the reighns.
when your horse is off course n your forced onto another lane.

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You going to record this? Really nice.
A lot of the rhymes i'm thinking some people will be like "That doesn't rhyme" but they'd be obviously reading it with their own accent, and I know how thick your accent is so I heard you doing this in my head lol, and yeah. Nah great rhyming for sure.

So this is where you got your MSN name thing from? Lol.
"You'd think i loved my past the way they call me Mr Daze."

Solid drop

I like it but to be honest with you evilA i'm not use to your text anymore lol I'm use to your recordings =] Hopefully you drop some more soon.

Nice lyrics!

I'm not sure how your accent is to see the flow. Seems pretty solid. I like the rhyme scheme you used too.

Thanks for the feedback people, much appreciated

very solid drop
flow was onpoint
fav lines was first 4 and last 2
"understand it's hard to hold the reighns.
when your horse is off course n your forced onto another lane."
big ups on that^
still keep droppin

young cats opinion: this shows that even if your not using thee most complex vocab, and use the most sofisticated and articulated words, STILL flow is flow, meaning that if you have amazing flow in what your write...the shxxxt will be great anyways. overall NICE

this is nice make a song outa this and it will be dope

ya bro good shit. you know what it is. empire bro. i would say record this but im pretty confident it already is lol. anyways bro stay up. get ahold of me.


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