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Old Posted 01-10-10
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Fake One

(J-Con Diss)


"hey scotty b i saw ya mum shes fat and round. yum"


Even with your fetish for fattys, you've made a mistake,
Mentioning my Mother?? Cunt, repent now in my wake...

If J-Con is truly back,
Then I'm just being forward,
In this foreword, in four words,
You're still heading floor-ward...

Let's go...

Are you suicidal? Mentioning my Mum? You've succeeded...
Provoked my retaliation... my relaxation impeded...
Been begging my return- response was inevitable,
I'd shit on your reputation but it's already irreperable...

So what the fuck is Jake on? This fake one can't see me-
Diss never even saw my radar... I play hard believe me,
It took a clear three weeks for me to even peep it...
I wasted time on this rhyme, if I went back I'd keep it...
What a worthless exercise; Jake ain't conning nobody,
I'll TKO first round; he throws fake punches so shoddy...
Pot calling the kettle black, he's talking so much shit...
Stays regurgitating faeces like a 2 girls, 1 cup bitch...

Look at it; hypocrite... my drops are all that he reads,
Extracts inspiration, then bites the hand that feeds;
Such greed... not hard to see why he's so outta shape;
Most exercise he does is masturbate over Ace & MaCe...
Don't procrastinate, get the definition... I'll wait,
I can half ass this diss and still assassinate...

Try not to menstruate- but all the names you swerved through?
None of us are waiters... but any of us could serve you...

...realness.



~LL~






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Old Posted 01-10-10
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"hey scotty b i saw ya mum shes fat and round. yum"
the yum part was sarcastic.

not a bad diss. but not many personals

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Old Posted 01-10-10
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couple lines were aight.. rest were jst ranting in my opinion.....

i think the best succession of lines was the intro..
best punch was the .. Ace & Mace line or the Serve You Line..

everything else is aight, flow is cool.. verbage is nice..
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Old Posted 01-10-10
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hey scotty b i saw ya mum shes fat and round. yum"


Even with your fetish for fattys, you've made a mistake,
Mentioning my Mother?? Cunt, repent now in my wake...

(okay good opener)

If J-Con is truly back,
Then I'm just being forward,
In this foreword, in four words,
You're still heading floor-ward...

(nice.. liked this also as an opener..nice personal)

Let's go...

Are you suicidal? Mentioning my Mum? You've succeeded...
Provoked my retaliation... my relaxation impeded...
Been begging my return- response was inevitable,
I'd shit on your reputation but it's already irreperable...

(liked the ending of this ballad of words but the punch was lacking much substance to long winded)

So what the fuck is Jake on? This fake one can't see me-
Diss never even saw my radar... I play hard believe me,

(seems like a COD subliminal for the gamers this was cool/creative..but not hot)

It took a clear three weeks for me to even peep it...
I wasted time on this rhyme, if I went back I'd keep it...
What a worthless exercise; Jake ain't conning nobody,
I'll TKO first round; he throws fake punches so shoddy...

(not really feeling this part)

Pot calling the kettle black, he's talking so much shit...
Stays regurgitating faeces like a 2 girls, 1 cup bitch...

(again liked the punch in the end )

Look at it; hypocrite... my drops are all that he reads,
Extracts inspiration, then bites the hand that feeds;

(interesting)

Such greed... not hard to see why he's so outta shape;
Most exercise he does is masturbate over Ace & MaCe...

(this was funny)

Don't procrastinate, get the definition... I'll wait,
I can half ass this diss and still assassinate...

(aight,could have been better)

Try not to menstruate- but all the names you swerved through?
None of us are waiters... but any of us could serve you...

(this was nice)


...realness.
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