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*Disclaimer* I'm just bringing :::Motivation:::

*We could go Beat for Beat but never blow for blow*

let it begin...

All these *juvenile adders* thinking there "spitting acid Coke"..
Cause One Punch from Child had-your stomach in Throat...
MY punch lines STIFF like Cartoon Characters in denim...
I'm saying before me u ain't seen no *carnage or venom*...
J CON ure a *flightless Bird* still stuck in that beginner stage..
Look at my Page n vent rage n i'll SHIT ALL over YA CAGE...
U need to *make sense* before u can "get that badder ware"...
right now u *rapping Bare*...multi's n punches equal rapper GEAR...
Don't worry u ain't HOME ALONE.. Shit half of the sites THERE!!
and the rest that held FEAR.. fell Harder than *GM STOCK SHARES*
Jaymzshady just wrote about this being another dot com..
but jay i mean mz.shady ain't nothing but *anotha drag MOM*..
giving birth to *Wack Flo'z* n i'm not dissing the rapper yo..
but most of this *Wack artist Threads* belongs in the hamper though..
I'm a committed crack head.. just go ask any one u consider Elite..
when i versed *TRAPPED ON A ISLAND* every bar felt Real-DEEP..
I got a lot a hoes who think my meta-flows bring Ill METAPHORS..
so i'll let you know.. to upgrade to a hard core MEtal-door..
cause this Verbal TerMITE destroy entire booths with one sound bite...
yeh that sounds tight.. Scotty B ya style doesn't fit right..
u a sick dyke.. why attack a *blind con* who don't look right..
Streamlyne I see you dropping in quantity n not quality..
when i text all across these boards u can call it E-quality...


*beginning hit list*
J-CON,Scotty B,Jaymzshady,FLO'z,Streamlyne...

http://www.anotha.com/f30/quick-scri...please-t68362/
http://www.anotha.com/f30/fake-one-j-con-diss-t68435/

wtf is with the * ... * shit i dont get why words are in astrixs

** emphasize where the point of the punch is coming from.. or wordplay..

Juvenile adders.. young/immature viper.. n some vipers give venom less bites in self defense.. (quick knowledge)

Carnage and Venom.. Both the literal meaning and they are Cartoon Characters that appeared in Spiderman!!

^bump^ should be interesting i hope *if people understand it*

def 1 of the better disses i've seen her in the last few months... nothn comes to mind str8 away anyways..

If u gotta use ** an explanations im assumin there for the less intelligent ppl.. i got every line, understood everything an im lookin to see who'll step up.


the mz.shady/drag mom line was my fave.

^good looking on the feed BUMP^

All these *juvenile adders* thinking there "spitting acid Coke"..
Cause One Punch from Child had-your stomach in Throat...

what is acid coke?? snakes spit coke?

MY punch lines STIFF like Cartoon Characters in denim...
I'm saying before me u ain't seen no *carnage or venom*...


Cartoon characters are stiff in denim??


J CON ure a *flightless Bird* still stuck in that beginner stage..
Look at my Page n vent rage n i'll SHIT ALL over YA CAGE...

not feeling the multi and are u also a flightless bird since u share the same cage??

U need to *make sense* before u can "get that badder ware"...
right now u *rapping Bare*...multi's n punches equal rapper GEAR...

ware=wear as in wear clothes?? if so then this line is ok


Don't worry u ain't HOME ALONE.. Shit half of the sites THERE!!
and the rest that held FEAR.. fell Harder than *GM STOCK SHARES*

are we having a slumber party at his house? and are you also dissing everyone else on this site that's not sleeping over??


Jaymzshady just wrote about this being another dot com..
but jay i mean mz.shady ain't nothing but *anotha drag MOM*..


played on dudes name. called him a queen too. so-ok

giving birth to *Wack Flo'z* n i'm not dissing the rapper yo..
but most of this *Wack artist Threads* belongs in the hamper though..

there's a member named Flo'z right? but ur not dissing him, or are you. The second line was ok. threads=clothes, hamper. I gets

I'm a committed crack head.. just go ask any one u consider Elite..
when i versed *TRAPPED ON A ISLAND* every bar felt Real-DEEP..

your a crackhead? a committed one at that. if u do something, gotta stick to it I guess. I'm guessing ur upping urself on the second line. new here so forgive me if I don't know a library

I got a lot a hoes who think my meta-flows bring Ill METAPHORS..
so i'll let you know.. to upgrade to a hard core MEtal-door..

top line, lame. I did like the metaphors/metal doors rhyme, but everything inbetween those words, not so much


cause this Verbal TerMITE destroy entire booths with one sound bite...
yeh that sounds tight.. Scotty B ya style doesn't fit right..

I liked the top line. good shit. the end of the second doesn't fit right

u a sick dyke.. why attack a *blind con* who don't look right..

first part, not hard enough. second, I'm debating how I feel about it. I'll give props

Streamlyne I see you dropping in quantity n not quality..
when i text all across these boards u can call it E-quality...

this was not too shaby. even though u kinda rhymed the same word twice. if you could have found something else instead of the first quality, this would have been a nice line.


hmm.... that was some horrible feedback. I think I attacked it more than anything. sorry homie. it's late, and I'm tired. be sure to rip my shit to if I decide to drop on here

^^ well good look on the feed^^
-lil clarification..

snake spit coke.. was a reference to them spitting dope/ sick shit.. basically only time they spit sick shit is when i leave there stomach in there throat.. stomach has acid.. not a fully thought out line.. but thats the concept i was going for.. lol..

cartoon characters aren't fluid.... they need other people to move them before they do anything... no carnage or venom since ive been here no one really drops anything to start up some action against other peeps besides j-con.. lol

Home alone was a ref. to the movie... n something else but w/e i'm tired of typing... n yes i'm dissing mostly everyone else on the site

yea, I got there was no carnage before you got here. still not getting the denim, but w/e. I still don't see what coke has to do with snakes. I got everything else. I know Home Alone was a movie, but the reference to me fell short. I'm all about subtle hints and digging deeper to find the meaning in other people's lines, but I failed to understand the ones I mentioned. They mostly seemed out of place and just tossed in there. I'm guessing it only took 10 minutes of ur life to write. It's cool for a quick key, but not as an attack on the site.