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NYC
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: New York
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Moderator
Join Date: May 2005
Location: Mount Gambier, South Australia
Posts: 20,352
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My connection's being shit so it doesn't completely load, lol. But from what I can see, this is sweet. The Money2Blow flyer is great. Only criticism would be that a space would be good between "All" and "Night". Real fresh design
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NYC
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: New York
Posts: 15,230
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Thanks man, preciate it. And, he (client) mistypes so many words.. I did this late at night, corrected a lot of words, guess I missed this one. Don't think he cares, though.
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Moderator
Join Date: May 2005
Location: Mount Gambier, South Australia
Posts: 20,352
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Lol I figured it was the client. Gotta give them what they ask for hey
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te moeilijk
Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: Netherlands
Posts: 7,368
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Shit is hot as usual!
Only point of critique is that on the first one I think some of the white book pages (flying around) are a little too blurry. ![]() |
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NOOOO ヽ(`0´)ノ
Join Date: Jun 2005
Posts: 2,663
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I only really like the main text on the middle flyer, good job on that. The rest is too basic, not really much to it. But I guess these things are pretty much made, just out of text.
Could've put some more effort into the text on the first flyer, cause that's way basic, lol . Text on the last flyer is all right. |
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Senior Member
Join Date: May 2005
Location: Tundra
Posts: 12,120
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Join Date: May 2007
Location: المغرب
Posts: 3,642
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3rd flyer is dope, 2nd is the best of all three pieces imo, really feeling the colour scheme & the the way you organized the text all over the flyer.
as far as the cover goes, like bjv pointed out, the paper sheets were overblurred lol. that's the only thing that held the piece back from being ill. ![]() |
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mª¢è - ₧
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: NYC
Posts: 4,669
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nice work.
but i dont really see whats so nice about the 2nd flyer. text is cool other then that, basic layout and background. third one text is hott. andthe first one is cool but too many pages are dull and blurry, shoudla made only like 2 or 4 pages blurry to give sense of deph with focal feel me. and theres a lack of deph in the first one, the back of the cave should be darker and dull for deph. other then that i mean their pretty eye catching ![]() |
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a.K.a. P.F
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: Vancouver / Toronto
Posts: 3,657
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Still think ur one of the illist on here!! Nice work my dude
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