Big M-Take It All Away

[Big M]

Re-Posted After Move...

More like rock lyrics, I did it quick, but the hook is from Puddle of Mudd's "Blurry"

I wanted to try something different, yes I know it's one word rhymes and all... but here it is...

[Verse 1]
She always was an angel
She didn't care about herself
Now my heart is mangled
I don't care about my health
She had to go and leave me
And I miss her so
I am left here grieving
Why'd you have to go

[Hook-Wes Scantlin]
Can you take it all away!
Can you take it all away!
When you shoved it in my face!
Explain the game to me!

[Verse 2]
No one is remaining
everyone goes on their own
and I think my life is fading
and I need to find a home
She just left me screaming
she just up and left me
my posture is leaning
Why can't I be accepting?

[Hook-Wes Scantlin]
Can you take it all away!
Can you take it all away!
When you shoved it in my face!
Explain the game to me!

[Verse 3]
Now I want to see you
so the gun is loaded
I was ready at you view
seeing your body bloated
made me want to end it
now I'm going through
After that I couldn't stay befriended
I will see you if it's the last thing I do

[Hook-Wes Scantlin]
Can you take it all away!
Can you take it all away!
When you shoved it in my face!
Explain the game to me!

[lil-dealler]

now on ya last drop with this i got that it was a rock song, so its definetly good although i dont know much shit about rock, but this was good and the style one line and each on after rhymed...good shit, keep at it

[Syk Dyssturbd]

I dunno much 'bout rock either but this was pretty tight, I like the story, pretty deep. For a rock song I'd say 10/10.

[Mike Check]

I had already read this, just never gave feed. It's a pretty good drop, a bit short though...

[Killaduce]

pretty sick biggy, keep it up dawg!

[Big M]

I've decided to keep working with this style along with regular raps, I'm surprised I was this good at it, so I'm gonna keep at it.

[arabianprince_cal]

yo man continue droppen this was good i listen to everything so im feelen this i seclude myself to one kind of music that is boring

[Banksss]

nice song
good story
deep feelings
keep it up

[JonJon]

a different style, not just for you, but for anotha, and its not bad at all, switchin between rock an rap wont be too hard for you as u can switch styles very easily, maybe even if you incorporated the styles and merged them together it could make a very good outcome,(of course theres a chance it wont work)


pretty good drop, i aint into rock much, but i aint guna shit on somthin thats good . . . . .keep it up


http://70.47.70.69/forum/showthread.php?p=1154#post1154

return feed please

[Fletcha]

Different and good. Keep at it, though I'm afraid you're unlikely to find much pointers here. And Blurry is one of my fave rock songs so it's a good hook.

[spiderlocg]

good shit man

[spiderlocg]

good shit man