Handle it?

[Misunderstood]

Handle it?

A grind which hustles with devil and spreads-your-pain
A blood that that stomps your heart and treats-your-vein
A suicide with no note and the bullet mocks-the-gun
The time errupts and with out eclipse dark blocks-the-sun
The mirror becomes your enemy and-eyes-shares-hate
The message comes with a blank letter and-demise-wears-fate
A trust becomes a word which stands-for-fake
A problem with a solution which is planned-for-mistake
A heart with no fuction to pump-your-blood
The lover which is created to dump-your-love
The boundary which has no punishment-for-crossin
The equation that doesnt gives the measurement-for-bossin
A solution that has no problem-confusing
A street that doesnt plays harlem-music
A bandana that doesnt stands for war-or-the-piece
The democracy that doesnt backs up law-or-the-police
The hope which has no intensity of appearin-real
The rope which only curves to see sphering-kill
A birthday cake with no permission to make candles-lit
Welcome to my life..now can u handle-it?

[Sin]

Tight drop Brotha as always nice multis and nice vocab but u sud get lines to the same length cause it can fuck up your flow, tho I'm sure it will be good at audio aswell so keep it up bro

[Young T]

this was a good drop, dome of the multies were forced but you made up for that with the lines that werent forced the ones that arent forced are hot, and the ones that are forced kinda dont make sense....nice drop overall 7/10

[Misunderstood]

^^^tell me which ones that didnt make no sense to u and i will try to explain 4 u

[Misunderstood]

it was a keystyle btw..i did in 10 mins..still uppin..

[young beezy]

yo miss some hot shit brotha fav part was this

A suicide with no note and the bullet mocks-the-gun
The time errupts and with out eclipse dark blocks-the-sun

keep upp on this overall the drop i believe was 9 outta ten i really was feelin it dog really was

[Misunderstood]

thanx mayne..

[JonJon]

you dont need to thank every single person for there feed . . . .

[Misunderstood]

why that bothers u?..that wont do any harm

[JonJon]

not but why thank them on msn after u ask them if your guna do it agian here . . . . .its jus a way to get your posts up

[Franchise]

pretty nice for a keystyle man..
u got nice flow.. it had shifts though..
u got plenty of multies but i kno u can use more..
overall this was a nice piece man.. keep it..

[ThE_kINg]

I like it man alot real nice read flow hot man Keep it up Home Boi :pimp: :pimp:

[Misunderstood]

i aint that obsessed with my posts..if i was i would be freepostin and goin over 7000 by now..thanx again for those who left feed..uppin..

[JonJon]

funny that tho, go look at the archive . . . . you'll find you thank people for feed more than you get it. . . . . .go check my posts in the archive . . . . . .all legit . . . . . .cus all my freeposts got taken off my post count

and to answer your question on msn . . . . .no i wont leave feed . . . .i left feed on your collab and u critised the feed like your too holy to get bad reviews, and you never returned the feed so i might aswell do what all these fakes doin



Hot drop mis' damn them multis wasnt forced or anything, really ill flow and this is great for a free

[Misunderstood]

funny that tho, go look at the archive . . . . you'll find you thank people for feed more than you get it-1. . . . . .go check my posts in the archive . . . . . .all legit . . . . . .cus all my freeposts got taken off my post count-2

and to answer your question on msn . . . . .no i wont leave feed . . . .i left feed on your collab and u critised the feed like your too holy to get bad reviews, and you never returned the feed so i might aswell do what all these fakes doin-3



Hot drop mis' damn them multis wasnt forced or anything, really ill flow and this is great for a free-4
1-i thank people for their feed..if u got a problem with that close ur eyez..
2-i couldnt care less bout ur posts..i dont go look at archive and search how many times u thanked people for feed like u did mine or how many posts were freeposts..
3-i explained u what that meant..i like bad feed..it helps me improve..i didnt critised there is a difference between explainin and criticin..
4-people u callin fake involved YB which is in ya crew or ex crew whatever is dat..if u dont like my shit u could have jus told me and i wouldnt ask you for feed..and i wont from now on..simple and plain..if u got somethin else to say say it over msn..i didnt created this topic to argue u..i created this topic 2 get feed on my shit and "thank" for em..if u cant deal with it dont select it with ya mouse..uppin for feed

[JonJon]

well since u posted this ima respond to it

1-i thank people for their feed..if u got a problem with that close ur eyez..

if you have a problem with what i see, dont fuckin put it there


2-i couldnt care less bout ur posts..i dont go look at archive and search how many times u thanked people for feed like u did mine or how many posts were freeposts..

i didnt look at no archive . . . .i said if YOU DO go look at it

3-i explained u what that meant..i like bad feed..it helps me improve..i didnt critised there is a difference between explainin and criticin..

thats all good . . . .i apologize i took it out of context

4-people u callin fake involved YB which is in ya crew or ex crew whatever is dat..if u dont like my shit u could have jus told me and i wouldnt ask you for feed..and i wont from now on..simple and plain..if u got somethin else to say say it over msn..i didnt created this topic to argue u..i created this topic 2 get feed on my shit and "thank" for em..if u cant deal with it dont select it with ya mouse..uppin for feed

YB was talkin shit behind my back so excuse me for callin him fake . . . . .its not that i mind peeps askin for feed, but when i ask for return feed i would like it and apreciate it . . . . .



now for the feed . . . . . .yes it is a good drop, wit some great multis . . . . .but some dont make sense, the sylable count it what makes the multi (as long as the words rhyme)
metas are nice . . . .keep at it

[Misunderstood]

its stupid to say whatchu say in the first cuz if u have problem with my go post it in dodge city or talk to me bout it on msn..dont post it here..about 2-where u know that i would find dat when i go look in archieve if u dont know?..thanx for the feed..oh wait..i cant thank..so..fuck you..:D

[Bob]

right well mis i liked this drop i think it had a ncie flow but i agree with jon about your multies, some of words in them didnt rhyme and you need them to have the same syllable count, aprt from that it was a nice drop